She knew the moment her lips touched his mouth that the last kiss they had shared was nothing at all. This – this violent burst of sensation in her bloodstream as she heard his sharp intake of breath and felt his lips mold against hers, fire to flame – was what kisses were supposed to be made of. Any description she had read, any visual she had gawked at in her twenty plus years on the planet, were no match to what was happening.
She pressed her lips into his, need she had rarely felt before, taking over her senses as her arms snaked up the front of his T-shirt and grabbed the lapels of his collar. It was akin to the sense of imminent loss and the promise of goodbye in the near future. Which was weird because wasn’t a kiss supposed to be the harbinger of good times? Shouldn’t she have felt her lips curving into a smile?
A gruff moan escaped his lips just as her brows knitted together as she felt his other free hand wrap itself around her waist and pull her flush against his body.
She had never been a physically affectionate person. Four years with Arjun had changed that to some extent. But nothing – NOTHING – could have prepared her for what Arnav’s body did to hers as her mind processed every single little detail with excruciating awareness – starting from his fingers that were splayed on the small of her back to his thighs that stood firm against hers right up to where her breasts were plastered against his chest. She could feel the hardened skin on the edge of her neck and the lick of his lashes against her cheekbones. It was then that she became aware of her glasses and how they stayed conveniently out of the way, much to her surprise. Her eyes flew open at the thought and she curled her fingers into his skin at the base of his throat.
As if reading her intentions, he tightened his hold on her – at the waist and the neck and slowly licked her lips with his tongue. Shocked at the surge of electric pulse in along her nerves, her mouth opened in a small captured gasp as she felt his kiss deepen.
She made an embarrassing sound as her left hand left his collar and curved around his neck. She had no clue if she was doing this right or not but since he wasn’t pulling away, she assumed she was free to ask for more.
Unfortunately for her, getting carried away with a kiss was clearly an eventuality she had not considered. If not for the fact that their bodies – paradoxically firm and fluid at the same time – were giving their deepest desires away, it was the sudden jerk of her arm that stretched her wound and made her audibly flinch at the blinding pain – enough to bring tears in her eyes. Or was it the overwhelming emotion that seemed to be coursing through her veins, finally spilling over?
“Shit!” He swore as he broke the kiss and let both his hands slide up her and down the small of her back in soothing circles. “I’m so sorry.” He stepped back and immediately turned to retrieve what she only now noticed was a small military style back-pack. Even as she stared, lips singing in slow chorus that was echoing in her ears, he extracted something and walked back to her.
“This is probably a little late…but…” He didn’t look at her while he spoke in barely audible rasps. He leaned in, crowding her senses as her eyes blinked and closed for a brief moment. She felt the cool touch of gel and skin on her burning skin – light and strangely uncomfortable in many ways. And then it was over.
She looked up and into his eyes, glazed and blurry. He looked flushed and golden, his hair even more tousled than it was when he had just walked in. She forced herself to not stare at his mouth – had she really kissed him so fervently? It was visible on his lips and in his eyes. It didn’t help that he wasn’t able to look anywhere other than her lips either.
“I’m fine.” She said softly as she tried to ignore how her mouth felt. Or the fact that she had just been kissed. Thoroughly. Completely. With no doubt of whether or not it could be classified as a kiss. And she had liked it. A part of her scoffed – liked? By Shiv-ji, she was so dead. What the hell had she done? How did one ever go back from here? By kissing him, she had consciously made the decision to keep this – and him – in her memory for the rest of her life. Five days ago, AV-Sir was still hovering around the edges of her past – one key milestone yes but still one that could be hoped to be forgotten. Now he was Arnav. And he had kissed her. How was she ever going to get over him now?
She frowned as her chest thumped nervously from within. Why was she thinking about getting over him? This should be the beginning. This was the true beginning
The answer was so obvious she was surprised it had taken her all this while to come to it. She blamed him – this person who was still holding her.
Shiv-ji, she groaned silently. He was still holding her. And she couldn’t stop thinking about going back to that kiss. Save me.
“You are going to say this was a bad idea,” He whispered and pressed his forehead against hers. “And that we should forget about it.”
Her heart slammed again against her ribs again. He seemed to be able to see through her and that scared the hell out of her. Relationships, her mother had said and she had always believed, were best worked when it was one of equals. This…this thing with Arnav Varun – it would never be equal. He would always hold this insane power over her. She knew it now. She had known it years ago. Yes, he was right. She knew this was a bad idea. And though she was a coward for not saying it out aloud, she believed it.
She shook her head and then realized she had no idea why she was shaking her head.
She took a small step back and watched as his arm loosened and fell away. He gingerly pulled himself away and looked up at her, his eyes searching her face.
“Arjun.”
“Arjun.” She whispered back in confirmation and bit her lips before looking away and taking one more step back. Away from him.
“We are not going to forget about this.”
Like she had claimed she had did before? She looked back up at him and saw him staring at her with that glint she had seen so often on this trip – it was almost as it was this brittleness that separated the AV-Sir she once knew from this Arnav.
This Arnav who had been so sure Tripti hadn’t been talking about Arjun that night.
This Arnav who had clearly not bought into her rationalization about not having feelings for him.
Of course, she concluded. He was never going to be convinced. She thought she was a good liar. That kind of confidence was bound to fall apart someday. And who better to discover the little crack than the man she kept falling in love with?
“I will not forget about it.” She said softly. I cannot forget about it even if my life depended on it.
“There is no going back to Arjun, either.”
In fiction, she knew, his words might have sounded like a command. Instead they were uttered like a plea, its polite, almost formal edges laced with a shard of urgency. She wished his words didn’t radiate little flashes of thrill up her solar plexus. “I was never with Ar…” She stopped herself in time. She may not have been with Arjun technically. But she had made a silent promise to herself. And to him. And now it lay broken. “If I was, I would never…I could never do that to him.” The warmth of the kiss was fast fading from her lips. A part of her was almost tempted to lean in and kindle the fire again. Except, Arjun had sneaked into the space between them. And he now stood their midst – a wispy memory and feeble voice she couldn’t drown out. Don’t break my heart.
Arnav took a deep breath and invoked damnation softly before pushing his right hand through his hair. He wasn’t looking at her now. And she could take those few minutes to study the desperation that seemed to be inked on his face, lines around his mouth. It made her want to wrap her arms around him again and kiss him till she could feel nothing except the drum of his heart against hers.
What had she been thinking when she had decided to give what Arjun was suggesting a chance? There was being delusional and then there was this…She had failed herself. And she was going to fail Arjun. “I have to tell him first,” She blurted out, more to herself than him, before panic completely drowned her senses. She needed to tell Arjun sooner rather than later. And he was going to ask her for reasons – which she now knew would break his heart. The angry outburst just last evening might have been ignored. But it couldn’t be forgotten. Her jaw clenched as she realized that her conversation with Arjun was hardly going to be a pleasant one but the extent of damage could in fact be of unimaginable proportions. When something unpleasant happened, it was in the nature of the Guptas to assume the worst was going to happen. She had, in relaxed times, laughed at it with Tripti. But now, with the fate of her friendship with Arjun hanging over her head, she found it far from funny.
“Khushi,”
She forced herself to look at Arnav to find that his eyes now were strangely shuttered. She watched as his jaw tightened as if he was gritting his teeth. He seemed angry and yet there was no reason for him to be angry. She had just said she needed to talk to Arjun first – it implied that she would come back to…this…that they shared. Even if she knew within that it was probably not as simple…Why then…She frowned. “I owe that to him,” She began and then fell silent, not knowing what to say.
He let out a deep sigh and shook his head. “I know and I understand. But…” He put his hands on his hips and turned away. “This is a mess. All of us…we really need to talk…” His words trailed away as he took a steps away from her. She didn’t hear what he finished that sentence with. But mostly because her mind was stuck on his words.
This is a mess
It was a mess. But the mess was hers. Unless…the only thing that was still tangled between them was his past with Saira. And she wanted to tell him that she didn’t care about what he once had with anyone anymore. Except she wasn’t even remotely capable of living with that curiosity. If this that they shared was real, then what did he have with Saira – the girl he was going to marry? And if that had come to naught, then what would this…ever come to? What did she want it to come to in the first place? Is that why he wanted to talk to her first. So that she would still have a way out if she so wished? Did that mean her feelings and her inability to walk away from him were invisible to him? Was her heart safe after all? And if it was, why wasn’t she more thrilled about it?
“But first, we need to go Rishikesh.” He said as he turned around, his face back to being even and placid as always.
She looked and him and shook her head slowly. “No seriously, I don’t want…”
“Unfortunately, I don’t think we are liberty to give in to our wants at the moment” He said softly to her, his eyes finally twinkling as they rested on her mouth and flipped back to meet her gaze.
She blushed furiously and swallowed in the hope that the little action would keep the blood from rushing to her face. “No, no…I mean…I can’t go like…” She looked down at herself trying to indicate to him that she was not dressed to leave the tent, let alone the camp, when she realized her clothes were in a complete disarray. The shirt she had opened most top buttons off to keep it pushed back and away from her bruise had slid down and had exposed a significant swell of her right breast. The left sleeve, loose as very few clothes were ever on her, had fallen away to her forearm. Her bra straps were peeking out of either sleeve. She looked up in utter shock, her face paling as she realized just how wanton she probably looked at the moment.
She stepped back and pulled her shirt up, her arms stretching her wound as she tugged at her clothes in urgent steps. She refused to wince even as Arnav shifted on his legs but refused to look away from her.
“Do you have a wide-necked vest or something…” He began, his voice raspy and sand-paper coarse as it slid against the column of her neck.
A vest? Was he kidding? She couldn’t step out of the tent with just a vest…not unless she wanted the entire world to see every part of her body spilling out of cloth. And why was he giving her clothing suggestion anyway? He needed to get out of the tent. She was just going to have to tell him to go as uncomfortable as it was.
“You remember reading about tetanus and lockjaw, right? Middle school biology? That is a real thing. Getting that tetanus shot, is non-negotiable. We need to go. And now.”
She bristled even though his tone was absolutely courteous. And she didn’t appreciate that he thought the only way to get to her was invoking school lessons and highlighting medical scares – even if it was working. Damn him.
“I’ll wait outside.”
With that he turned around and walked away, leaving her gaping at the rustle of the tent flap that now separated her from him. What the hell had just happened here in the last few minutes? She sunk to her bed and took a deep breath even as her thoughts churned into a whirlpool. She had gone from being kissed for the very first time to worrying about losing her best friend to feeling utterly naked and exposed to eyes that had never strayed from her gaze.
And now she was required to be alone with the man she didn’t want to peel herself off of.
She groaned and held her head in her palms, her eyes closing as her pulse procreated and chose to beat in her lips with just as much relish as it did just below her left shoulder.
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Eventually, it was a kurta she had tossed into her bag at the last minute while packing that came to her rescue. It left her back bare but stuck to her body and dipped too low on the front and the back to be decent. And in her current state, a dupatta was out of question. She looked at herself in the mirror and sighed. The bun Aditi had so carefully pulled her hair into was now a messy heap of entangled curls, most scraping her already injured skin, leaving flashes of burn memories behind each time. She pulled the band holding her hair down and tried to pull them back into a bun, only to wince every time she tried to raise her hands above shoulder level. Giving up after a few minutes of concerted effort, she pulled her hair into a bunch and let it hang on her other shoulder. She then took a deep breath and decided she couldn’t delay the inevitable any longer. The fear of lockjaw was way higher than the anxiety of being alone with Arnav again. Clenching and unclenching her fists, she walked towards the exit flap of her tent and stepped out into the sun.
Arnav was standing just a few feet away, hands folded behind, his back ramrod straight and held held high, like he was looking at something in the distance.
She walked up, her voice box trembling as she decided she would have to call him something to get his attention. AV-Sir – he didn’t feel like anymore. Arnav seemed too personal…anything else…Clearing her throat and saying let’s go was an option she didn’t quite like. As filmy as she was, embodying the sixties heroines was not exactly her idea of who she wanted to be. Why couldn’t he just turn around on his own?
Enough, Kaveri Gupta, she scolded herself. There should be an expiry date on melodrama. Get over it.
No sooner had she muttered that to herself, Arnav turned around and she stopped in her tracks. She had rarely known what to say to him and now that they had kissed, all she could think of was that. She needed to think about other things – anything that wouldn’t involve the memory of how it felt to…
“It might be a good idea to tie your hair up.”
“I’m not able to…erm…lift my hand…It seems to be jammed…” She shook her head. He was right. She plucked the cotton scrunchy off her wrist and gently lifted her hands to tie it on one side, without lifting her arms.
“I can…let me help,”
“Huh?” She asked as she squinted up at him, trying to see what his expression looked like but it was too bright and the sun was right behind his head, casting a dark shadow on his face and a halo around his head.
Before she knew it, he had come over around her, with his palm extended. Stumped, she quietly placed her band in his palm and waited as he gathered her hair, his fingers brushing against her scalp, her neck as he quickly pulled it up into a bunch behind her neck.
“Okay?” He whispered, his breath against her neck, his fingers grazing her shoulder before his hands fell away.
She nodded, unable to spit out a word in the aftermath of a bundle of nerves that her body was in the moment. She turned around to look at him again. There was something in his eyes that she couldn’t ignore as he watched her unblinkingly. For a second, it almost looked like he was going to kiss her again.
So she blinked and spoke quickly, before she lost her head. “How will we go to Rishikesh? The SUVs must have left to pick the others up from after rafting?”
She saw him smile softly as he looked at her.
“What?”
He shook his head. “You didn’t say car.”
She couldn’t help the fact that her lips curved of their own accord. “I am a mechanical engineer. And a Speed Motors employee. They are not cars. None of them are.”
This time he chuckled. “Hatchbacks and sedans?”
She shook her head. “Segments. Based on wheel base. Desi company. Only marketing and Sales is allowed to use international classification”
The two of them laughed and Khushi watched as Arnav’s face changed. There was glimpse of a boy she once knew – the one who had spoken so beautifully about wanting to spread his wings and explore new skies. It was heartening to see that he might still exist under all that gravity he now carried with him.
“What?”
She shook her head. “How are we going to Rishikesh?” She asked again.
This time his smile was sunshine and secrets, flirting, boyish. Drop dead gorgeous. “Bullet Electra.”
River Song, Music and Lyrics
Song Title: Sairat Zaala Ji
Album: Sairat (Wild)
Singers: Chinmayi Sripada, Ajay Gogavale
Music: Ajay – Atul
Lyrics (in Marathi): Nagraj Manjule, Ajay-Atul
For the English translation of the song, please visit this link. I personally believe translating takes away the essence of the poetry (Hence the lack of translation for other songs). Marathi, however, I assume is less present here and hence the translation). Knowing nothing of Marathi though I have personally still not needed words to go with this song.
It’s a song about that streak of wildness, the little unspoken words that can catches you unaware one fine day – even if it is not as dramatic as our movies would have us believe!
Next Update: Monday, Sep 19, 2016
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Dhak dhak
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Nivvi, how do you do it every time ?
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Charu!!! Did you forget?
S.T.A.L.K.I.N.G learnt from the King. XD ;)
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How could I forget HIM? 😉
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Leh… Pad gayi kaleje mein thandak?! 😀
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Hamare kaleje mein aag laga kar! 😉
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A note and another my fingers play,
A touch of lips, a taste that stays.
To love you slow, to love you deep,
Forever and over, and memories to keep.
I sing this song O love of mine,
Until stars will be and their shine.
So hold me close, set me free,
Until there’s nothing but you and me.
Until there’s nothing but you and me.
The kiss put stars in my eyes and then some. The first kiss is a treasured memory. An urge to etch those few moments into the very veins in her heart so that with every beat, she relives that precious moment. Arnav’s hair – a sexy mess and Khushi’s disheveled state or should that be thoroughly devoured? Uff! <3
It's heartening to see Arnav Varun back. The twinkle in his eyes, his flirtatious, drop dead gorgeous grin, and the lightness in him even if it lasts for little pieces of time. Mar jaawaan!
Bullet Electra! Heart thumps in anticipation, with a rapid tattoo that refuses to settle down! I wouldn’t mind becoming the mirror that rests on the machine. Wandering and wondering she finds herself gazing at his handsome reflection in the silver glass and finds her own next to it. In a beat, their eyes meet; she finds his sunrise-flecked ones and there’s a blush that paints her cheek, a twinkle that illuminates his eyes and a warmth that fills their hearts. Or can I be his scent? The scent that fills her as she presses her face into his back as the wind wipes over them. Can I be the pads of her fingers as they glide over his abs with just the thin layer of cloth separating the hard muscles from the hesitant exploration of artistic fingers? Sigh!
Meera, whatever I say wouldn’t begin to convey the beauty of the paradise you weave for us to revel in. Bewitched forever! :)
PS: Going to re-read a million times and one more; always one more.
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U leave me spellbound with this particular comment Nivz!! 😍😍
U pretty much spoke for the entire sisterhood today with your comments!! All our feelings as well!!
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Agree
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Nivi 😘🤗… Tumhare lafhzon ne mujhe mantramugdh kar diya…Ati sundar!! 😍❤️
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Haha! ROFLing at Matramugdh, Divs! 😝😂
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ROFL,….
Meaningwa bhi bataido, is *mantramugdhwa* ka 😝
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Lol Avni 😂😂
Spellbound
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I fainted —-
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There is everyone’s writing style and then there is Nivi’s! Your imagination, when it finds the right words, makes the whole thing magical! Bewitched forever indeed!! 😘😘😘😘
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Nivi tum best Ho! Giving everyone an inferiority complex.
Run her hands over his abs – fabulous idea! And imagine the things she could do to the gash… ☺️ Bas they had better make use of this yummy trip on that mean machine!
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Arrey, maine toh kuch nahi kiya….
Asli intezaar toh tumhare comments ka hota hain. And your songs put chaar chand!
Gash is dangerous territory. Once thought about, no amount of anything can pull me back from the possibilities of what Khushi could do to it. If there’s a scene with that, now or in the future, I’ll keep ambulance on stand-by. XD
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This where wise (also boring) people would interject with directions to…well…. Get a room ;);)
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Boo. This is our adda
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Ambulance kya kafan le aao! That gash, the abs – that’s just the beginning and my poor heart will suffer an overload right there!
😍😍 Munna kindles the unthinkable, well hidden parts of my brain (and my ovaries!)
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I’ll get two then. XD See this …
While Arnav Varun is more appealing, this chingari is enough to set our dreams on fire. We aren’t to blame here. Jaao pehle uss aadmi ka sign leke aao jisne humaari raaton ki neend churayi!
Will AV put on his aviators for the bike ride? ;)
Meera- room ke ander bhi ghus jaayenge. Sharam jaaye tel lene.
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Oh my goodness! Be still, my heart!
Yes sharam haya all in the gutter. Nivi, let’s just hop on to this ride, shall we? (Shivji – aviators please 😎😎)
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Let’s go. B) We can ask this man too…
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Done! He has to be there ya 😻
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Yeh lo Nivi ;) <3
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Kya kar rahi ho tum?
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D,….
Haye after all those comment now this GIF….tum Aaj Katal Karne pe tuli ho. 😍🤗
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😉😘
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Socho mere toote phoote heart ka kya hoga! 😍
I’ll definitely need a visit to the hospital! Hehe!
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What is with you and transfiguration today Nivi?! Mirror, scent, and finally her fingers? :) I guess the last choice will have a tough competition and with Sohni being one of the fierce competitor :)
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I’ll take anything Anu. ;)
This is why uparwala has given us 10 fingers. We can share. I know Sohni wouldn’t be so nirdayi. Haina? ;)
The little extra weight Khushi curses – just imagine, Arnav has that much more to touch. ;) XD
(That’s it! I’m tumbling down the slope, there’s no getting back now.)
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Who are you?!?! And what have you done to my Nivi?! ROFL! This baby is on a roll today! 😘😘
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Nivi, take meera’ advice please get a room…. Girls ( you and twiggy) are really riot…
First of all… Your words makes us speechless ( me at least – though I think I might be talking for few people here) with your uber awesome comments. And cherry on top even after all that is your poem…👌🏼👌🏼
And than can’t even stop laughing. Aur fir gutter mind main kya kya scenes chaletein hain woh to bata nahi saktein… Dimag ke Ghode ko jo tum log ghass dikhatein ho…aur woh jo sarpat bhaagta hain…bas yehi ke saktein hain ki room bhi lenge to AC bhi dalva Na padega… Garmi bahut badh jayegi
Ek kamra ho🏠 Usme charpai ho🛏,
Uspe Arnav, Khushi bin rajai ho..
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Sejal sahiba, gutter mein nahi jiya toh kya jiya. 😜😂
Aap batayein, dil mein kuch kuch nahi hota?
Last two lines…. 😄
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True that gutter mein nahi jiya to kya jiya 😜
Aur sirf kuch kuch.?? Bata hi to nahi saktein..
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ROFL…..
SEJAL….tum bhi Kum nahi ho…. bina razai haaa? Matlab sabhkuch sahi se Dikhtahai chahiye ……😝😂
Aur subh dekhenge bhi,….doorbin leke,…to make sure Sabh sahi se jaa raha hai…..🙀😍😝😂🤗
Bichari Meera bhi soch rahi yogi,…Kya item hai yeh ladkiyaan bhi,….inko Kuch likho tou bhi problem aur na likho tou bhi problem.
Comment padke Shivji , Shivji chant kar rahi hogi. 😝😂👍🏼
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AVNI 😅😅😅😅😅
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Kum aur woh bhi hum.?? Shivji Shivji…
Meera to bichari Kay socehgi…ek scene with kiss…that too so decent…we went all the way….in Nivi’s own mukh- kamal se nikli vaani main….’gutter main nahi jiya to kya jiya?’ 😝😝
Marna mat 🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Guys loveeeee love handles 😍😍
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Oops! They are both mechanical engineers. I should have said “spare tires” 😂
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And lourve…..😝😍👏🏻👍🏼
Absolute agree with u there Nivi. 👏🏻👏🏻😂👍🏼😍🤗😝
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I see what you are saying Meera! :D
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Meera and speechless…yeh kaise hua, kab hua, kyun hua… Koi batayega !! 😉😘
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Divya is on a roll today. Kya comments kya gifs.
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😉😘
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Haina,…tum logo he Meera ki bhi bolti baandh kardi….deva!!!
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Nivi, that superb imagination of yours will leave us a pile of mush by the time Meera updates! I for one am happy to live in the illusion. In many ways the trip to Rishikesh on the Bullet Electra will be a milestone…another one for Khushi to notch up to her bed post of memories….if only the good times were forever!
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Nivz….awesome comment…..
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This comment requires special attention and a separate reply. And that will be done later at night.
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Nivi,….😳 Is this really you?!? 🙃
Koi ek glass pani Lao mere liye,….I am feeling parched after reading her comment,……💦
Jokes apart,…if Meera gets the action going then u are the fuel to the chingari woman. Holly itussi kiss ko freaking get the room woman band diya….👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
I fainted reading this AV in the update, tumhari comment se toh death hi ho gayi Meri…abh band ek hafte kaise rukhe,….😍😍😍
Meera, aisa nakko Karo…..hum choti so Jaan pe Thoda Taras khao…koi ek hafte room Mein kaise band rahe….bullet pe Thoda jaldi ser karwado please….🙏🏼
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I am also in line here behind AVNI asking for early bullet ride dear Meera🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏.
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There are ariver updates and than there are your comments. Can never miss them and awaits them with same eagerness as the update.
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ME
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Nivi is a witch, by the way. I can’t even..
That being said – excitement is getting totally out of control to forgive my incoherence.
Jhakaas Kiss. Worth the wait. A real kiss. Complete with tonsil hockey and bra strap visibility. Next time around let’s teach them the joys of a hickey. ;)
But this is the first time she didn’t completely throw Arjun out her mind as soon as AV made an appearance. She still thought of him, felt for him, felt remorse for the silent promise she cannot fulfil, for the heart she is going to have to break. Even I dread that confrontation. “Don’t break my heart”, that boy said with such sincerity. His heartbreak will break me too, I think.
But for the moment let’s focus on pleasant happenings. Dene wala jab bhi deta, chappar phaad ke deta hai. True saying. Kiss + bike ride + (insert other interesting things I hope will happen – they’d be idiots to waste the many tempting opportunities this trip to Rishikesh promises) Shiv-ji, get these two to make the best of it please.
These people need to communicate. Like with actual words and not intense/teasing gazes. And it has to come soon before there is another mountain of misunderstandings and secrets.
But we got a glimpse of old AV Sir – one I have missed so dearly. To me that was perhaps a tad bit more precious than even the long awaited kiss. I hope to see that boy come to life again, let go off the weight he’s been carrying around.
Happy update. Must enjoy while the merriment lasts. The heart is already thudding with fear for Arjun.
Peppy happy number for this fun update!
Gale se laga loon, labon pe saja loon
Tere afsaanon ko main apna bana loon
Dard hai halka sa, magar ho raha hai
Jaan-e-jaan dilon pe pyaar ka
Ajab sa asar ho raha hai
Jo haal dil ka, bidhar ho raha hai
Woh haal dil ka, udhar ho raha hai
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Joys of a hickey 😂😂
I like the way you think Twiggy 😉
A strategically placed hickey no less!! 😂😂
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And I love tonsil hockey, Twiggy! This was too much fun….almost as cool as the happy wala update…well, shall I amend and say largely happy wala….as you said thoughts of Arjun cast a pall of foreboding. Here’s hoping we will enjoy some pleasures of Rishikesh with these two people with double barreled names….lets hope they give each other a small piece of paradise, if nothing else…to treasure for the long future years of drought…because as per the prologue, it is not too far away….sigh!
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I love the song Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai… 😘
Apt for hamare chahetey ladka/ladki and their current haalat !! 😉
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Bhere bhere is that strategic place— phkeeze tell😜👻
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Lol Meenu 😂😂
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So that it is easily visible to a lot of people! 😜
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Twiggy … You and your imagination are making us all go wild with excitement …
Hickey and all … wah … can’t wait …
Lovely song … yehi haal hai hum sab Ke dil Ka :)
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Agree K, Twiggs, great song….Sarfarosh another all time favourite, Aamir Khan and Sonali Bendre sizzled! Rishikesh….here we come! 😉
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The song!!!! Sigh
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Joys of Hickey!!!!! Ha Ha Ha…..
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What a selection of song… Not only the emotions…complete with setting of ‘River’ in the background…
Were you by any chance hoping that it will rain and they can get ‘ahem…ahem’
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Joys of Hickey…..ROFL
TWIGGY-ji aapbhi kissise Kum nahi ho and that was very well done. 👍🏼👏🏻👏🏻😝😍
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Dear twiggy,
It was really hilarious to read the line “dene wala ….”..
But I couldn’t understand who that ” dene wala” is??? :)
R u referring to our dear Meera or AV sir???
:)
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Moi 😘
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Meera, Thank you 😘😘
I want to give you a BIG squishy HUG… I am so happy today !! 😘😘🤗🤗😍😍
This one’s for you Meera and all my amazing Sanki Sisters
😘❤️
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Wah, Divs! Koi tumse seekhe about picking the most appropriate song for each scene! 👏🏽🌺
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Thanks Anu dahling 😘😘 Today I really am on top of the world with this happy, buoyant update !! 😊😍
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Haaye! Bulls eye! 😘😘
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Yes, it takes two to tango, but this passionate shimmy took it to a whole other level. When Khushi’s lips touched Arnav’s it was like a flash fire, a spark to dry tinder, an instant explosive conflagration flaring out of control. His touch sent frissons of alien sensations coursing through her, making tiny bubbles of effervescence explode in her veins. His slow drugging kisses making her dizzy, immersed in a heavy fog of desire that swathes her in a hazy cloud.
Arnav leaning over to gently apply a cooling gel (is this the infamous silver nitrate gel?) to the angry wound on Khushi’s neck/shoulder, in turn re-awakens emotions that Khushi is having a hard time keeping in check. I can’t get the endearing image of this flushed, disheveled, thoroughly kissed young woman out of my head; a memorable first kiss that rocked the ground under her feet, sending tsunami like waves of molten fire coursing through her, rendering her breathless and turning her bones to jelly.
I am glad that instead of words they let their fused lips, thundering hearts and inquisitive fingers communicate their churning emotions, tender longing and the insatiable yearning of their souls. The spectre of Arjun makes his presence known even whilst these two lovers are swimming in the eddying whirls of passion. This time around Khushi’s thoughts of Arjun and his proposal are not a deterrent, but instead reaffirm her unalterable feelings for Arnav. She finally realizes she has to say NO to Arjun. Her refusal will no doubt break Arjun’s heart, but he needs to hear this ‘bitter truth’, so that he understands once and for all that he and Khushi can never be anything more than good friends.
I love this gentlemanly lover boy Arnav; not only is he is caring, tender, warm and amorous, but also has a wry sense of humor. I agree with him that it is a ‘messy’ situation and he and Khushi need to talk and address all the unanswered questions that have been bothering them; but first things first… they need to visit with a doctor in Rishikesh, get a professional opinion on Khushi’s burn wound and get her a tetanus shot.
I am hoping that this Rishikesh trip will provide them with the much needed time together, giving them an opportunity to talk to and learn about each other, discuss their career goals and the future of their fledgling relationship. I am well aware separation is imminent for these young lovers, but will this parting be an amicable one or one fraught with heartbreak and sadness ?!?
Meera, thank you for surprising us with this delightful chapter !! I am looking forward to the bike ride to Rishikesh and some tender stolen moments for the lovebirds. <3
O Mere Humrahi Meri Banh Thame Chalna
Badle Duniya Saari Tum Na Badalna
Pyaar Humme Bhi Sikhla Dega Gardish Mein Sambhalna
Kahin Beete Na Yeh Raate Kahin Beete Na Yeh Din
Gaata Rahe Mera Dil Tu Hi Meri Manzil
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Omg- divs finally you wrote your comments and the wait was worth . You have added ” chaar chaand to the update”. Best part was my one of the favourite song the end — always live this song— dil jhoom jhoom kare after listening to this song. Beautiful 👌👌👌👌
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That was a lovely comment divz. It was with him that she discovers the secrets of desire, from the start. Remember that walk after the first rehearsal in book one, where she’s sort of spooked by the physical reaction that she has towards him and then the imagined kiss :-) Now the girl may think if that is all there is between them. Its that conflict between her heart and mind which will steer the course of things.
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Thanks Priya🤗😘
I agree these two share a fiery attraction and love for music, but they don’t know much about each other. In order for a relationship to be successful you need more than just physical compatibility. I am hoping on this trip to Rishikesh they will get a chance to talk, really talk, get to learn about each other, small steps but necessary nonetheless. Now Khushi’s heart know it beats solely for her Arnav and her mind tells her she has to say ‘NO’ to Arjun, so I don’t know what will trigger this kashmakash between her heart and mind making her step back from Arnav. I am going nuts thinking of what could possibly have transpired to make these two part ways ?!?!
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Eloquent, articulate….umm…the constructs…erm….running out of words here! Divz, kya…kya tha yeh?! Wow! Loved it jaaneman! Kitni baar bolein, write something for us…a short story, a long story, anything!!! This was beautiful baby! 😘😘
lol I loved the use of gentlemanly lover boy Arnav..almost paints a picture of a well-behaved teenager(if those two words go together ever that is!) in my head :D
The separation can’t be amicable Divz. Can there ever be one? If the trip to Rishikesh is good and a memorable one, then only a really potent reason can pull these two apart. They both realise how much they need to be in each other’s life and that the time to run away from each other is over. It will be hard to keep away from each other after this. So, I dread it. This is a blissful phase for them, and to go from here to not knowing the whereabouts of Arnav(prologue) a few years from here on…..shudder to think what went so wrong between them. But I also think about the ‘wooing’ that will follow the desolation phase in the next book.
Keep calm and read on is the mantra Divz! :D
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Thank you Sohniye 🤗😘🤗😘
You girls are too kind !! 😘
Arnav does behave like a teenager, especially his stuttering and stammering and his vacillating mind which drives us all nuts!!😉
After these memorable moments and the upcoming trip to Rishikesh what can possibly happen to drive a wedge between the two, making them withdraw from each other. I have been driving myself crazy thinking of the how, what, why’s 😳
I think I should take you advise and just sit back and rides the waves. When the great deluge occurs we will hang on for dear life, hug it out and survive thinking of upcoming sunny, cheerful days of Book 3 😊
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Divs!!!!!! The kiss scene was an OS in itself…. you have such way with words!!!! Absolutely delightful. You should write – more than comments ☺
“but will this parting be an amicable one or one fraught with heartbreak and sadness ?!?” I am so confused on this one yaar 😨
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Thank you Anu 😘😘🤗🤗
You girls are too sweet 😘
Like you it is the imminent parting which is driving me nuts !! What could possibly happen that will make these lovebirds withdraw physically and emotionally from each other ?!?! Sooch sooch kar paagal ho rahi hoon 😩
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Yes divs — I am sailing in same boat and somehow don’t even want to think of some most dreadful thoughts I have. Better to stay away from them😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Meenu 😘😘
I think we should stay calm, let things take their own course.
Let’s enjoy this ‘lovey dovey’ phase for now…Ok 😊😘
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:D that’s a good plan :D
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I smell a googly on the way…..
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Koi shakh!! Writerji ki specialty hai 😉
I just hope that the said curveball is delivered after a blissful Rishikesh trip, at least this way we will have these happy memories to get us through the fast approaching dark, dismal days !! 😉
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Meenu ab toh Writerji ne bhi bol diya so let’s stick with the plan 😉😄
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I see smoke behind writerji’s words divs and it will envelope us all soon it seems😭
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Meenu we all know googly is on its way… Bas timing nahin pata !! 😳
So stay calm for now, will ride out this storm together…you, me aur hamari behene 🤗😘
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You know Meera I love you so much—‘ aab jale par namak to mat chidko ‘🙏🙏
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Divz, sochna band karo :-)
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Priya 😘😘
I will listen to you and Sohniye and stay calm, no overthinking, just go with the flow 😉😊
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Soch soch ke we’ll beome paagal and we can’t blame the laad governor also!
Time for the “ultimate jab dil hi toot gaya playlist” ?
NAAAAAAAHIIIIIIIN
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Not quite yet..this is the calm before the storm!! Believe me it will be sooner than you think when all of us will be posting sad, bawling your eyes out Bollywood songs 😜
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Res
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It is high time that these two stopped playing hide and seek – hiding true feelings from oneself, and the other. With this update, I saw them being themselves without any restraints after giving free rein to their own hearts – even if the stolen moments were intermittently marred by the royal mess that is their reality. Before I get all jubilant about the bike ride, I have to remind myself that it is going to downhill, and that too soon. The question that will keep us awake now is still the same as in the last few weeks – what goes wrong from this point when the two did not need words to bare their heart to each other. How did it go from this ‘true beginning’ to nothing for next few years? I am really looking forward to seeing what you have in store there for us Meera :)
I loved this point of no return. It cemented in Khushi’s mind that she can never see Arjun in the same light as she sees Arnav. The idea of giving the relationship with Arjun a try, was a seed planted in Khushi’s mind by the twin sisters called guilt and self-preservation. Fortunately for me, these twins seem to be incapable of nurturing the seed sufficiently to let it germinate, and grow into a plant that can withstand the force called destiny. Not when destiny is hell bent on confronting the twins by putting Arnav and Khushi in close quarters whenever possible. Every such confrontation, makes Khushi realize dimensions of her that she was not aware of before – selfishness, desire, and even vengeance. After all, she is human too – she had once selfishly used Arjun as a shield, and now had wanted to selfishly create a memory, potentially as a keepsake before proceeding to kiss him.
(“I was never with Ar…” She stopped herself in time. She may not have been with Arjun technically. But she had made a silent promise to herself. And to him. And now it lay broken. “If I was, I would never…I could never do that to him.” The warmth of the kiss was fast fading from her lips.) – To me, this moment was akin to Khushi regurgitating aloud the realization that hit her clearly in the last few minutes, amidst all the raging hormones – the fact that she has to reject Arjun’s proposal. But then, when I thought she had some clarity, she seemed to succumb to the maelstrom of confusion on hearing his words “This is a mess”. One minute she is musing about how AV can read her, and the other she thinks whether her feelings and her inability to walk away from him were invisible to him. She is back in that vortex of never ending thoughts and even brings Saira into it. This girl has been on a roller coaster ride every minute of Book 2, and her mind is constantly amidst the rapids, which she has so far faced only once physically during the rafting trip. So, I am not judging her at all. Everyone deserves a right to make and live through their mistakes.
“Relationships, her mother had said and she had always believed, were best worked when it was one of equals. This…this thing with Arnav Varun – it would never be equal. He would always hold this insane power over her. She knew it now.” – When will she realize that she has the same influence on him?! Pagli! :)
Now, what is with this erstwhile demi-god who goes from the ‘stunning stutterer’ to the ‘eternal whisperer’? “He whispered and pressed his forehead against hers.” Hai Ram! Arnav Varun is going to be the death of me. Now, coming back to commenting – “We are not going to forget about this”, & “There is no going back to Arjun, either.” You say they were uttered like a plea, its polite, almost formal edges laced with a shard of urgency. To me it signals his last desperate attempt to drive sense into this girl who creates havoc in him. Looks like destiny, along with Khushi, aided him in his mission today.
Clearly, desire was evident on both sides today, as they fight intermittently with guilt and a messy reality. The moment where the shared mechanical engineering background made its presence felt, was a welcome relief for them and us, from the heavily charged atmosphere :) Also, I found the part about how Arjun had creeped into the space between them as a wispy memory was very well written. But I guess, even that creepy presence of the proverbial third wheel could not bring down long suppressed yearnings of hearts :)
Lastly:
1. Throughout my first reading of the update, I was bracing for someone to barge into the tent. Luckily it did not happen, a least so far. :) :) :) So of course, I had a crazy grin on my face for most of the afternoon!
2. “She frowned as her chest thumped nervously from within. Why was she thinking about getting over him? This should be the beginning. This was the true beginning. The answer was so obvious she was surprised it had taken her all this while to come to it. She blamed him – this person who was still holding her.” I read this a few times, and still am not sure if I am understanding this rightly – is the obvious answer the fact that she had, in her mind, committed to Arjun because of which she is thinking about getting over Arnav? And is she blaming Arnav for making her lose her control? Now, I don’t know if I am making sense.
3. This is a mess. All of us…we really need to talk… – what would she have heard from Arnav if she had not been stuck on his first sentence? Mmmmm ….. still wondering…..
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Anu Hugggggssss — this is one comment that is totally bang on – in every way!!!
I read this comment and my thought is — I dont even need to comment any more, on the update!! Thats just how beautifully you commented!!!
Honestly have nothing more to add here!!!
You , me , Meenu, Lavz, Divz all have always been apprehensive about what really leads to the prologue.
The heartbreak is coming and soon… but for now.. lets enjoy this phase with them!!!
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Anu, a beautiful dissection of every aspect of what that chapter meant. Simply incredible that she does not seem to realize he harbours similar feelings for her. Like you, I worry about things going downhill either at Rishikesh or immediately after. However, will take all the small drops of sunshine at this point, and greedily hoard them like Khushi in IPK did with her stars! Beautiful! But yes, let us gear up for the sad times…and they are coming….Meera ominously warns us that Khushi looks at this kiss as a goodbye rather than a harbinger of good times….devastation!
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Thanks Anu…☺
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Anu, how beautifully said! My thoughts often shift from one to another with an alarming speed and I’m lost in their whirlwind. With you everything seems like a natural progression.
Yes, apprehensions and the knowledge of devastation lurks, but we’ll take the smiles and laughter. To reminisce at another time. :)
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Looks like natural progression but ot is not!!! Random notes with whirlwind speed were first made on word doc… they were then assembled in an order that made sense subsequently… so same here my friend 😀
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Maybe the prologue just covers the small break between the camp and their return to the job…
hope par duniya kaayam hain..
Loved the comments… Anu..
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Thanks JG… it does not seem to be a small break… it is at least 3-4 years if memory serves right… because Khushi finished her management course before prologue
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is liye to hope hope hope….;)
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Lol, about someone barging in…She took a small step back and watched as his arm loosened and fell away. He gingerly pulled himself away and looked up at her, his eyes searching her face.
“Arjun.”
This is where I actually screamed NAHINNNNN! I actually thought he was standing there and K was looking at him! This man unnerves me with his presence and absence too! He is a big psychological roadblock on the road to Lurrrve! :P
How beautiful can you write woman! 😘😘 You have covered it all, succinctly and eloquently! Loved the review Anu 😘 :)
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Sohniye, I think we all are nervous about this Arjun, he has an annoying habit of apparating out of thin air at the most inopportune moments !! 😜
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Anu— right on spot what we all are feeling. You have described everything so eloquently in classic Anu’ way— absolutely loved the analysis. My brain is still confused how and why will they separate now — gosh. Me too agree with your number 2 and 3 in the last.
Let’s see if much awaited dug dug ride happens
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Anu loved your comment and you touched on the things that perplexed me too. In the euphoria of that kiss, I feel there are points that I missed out, which didn’t register as it should.
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Read and re-read after the Nasha wears off… but these girls are not help are they?! With gifs and hickeys!!!!
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Absolutely not! helpful I mean :-)
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Anu, a beautifully articulated analysis. 👍😘❤️
Like you the entire fandom is thankful that Arjun did not interrupt this magical moment.
I too was stumped by Khushi feeling that the kiss was a harbinger of the end, rather than the beginning of something beautiful !! Does this girl possess a sixth sense or is it her insecurity an anxiety that is making feel this way when all she should be feeling is euphoria ?!?
Loved the new phrase eternal whisperer coined by you for our sputtering hero Arnav.
Anu, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your lucid and crisp comment !!🤗😘
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Thanks Divs… ab thumhari baari…
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Anu,…..what do I say, 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
I had thought I’d come today during break and share my 2 cents,…..shayad should have done that before going through the the comments.
Ur comment is so beautiful, strategically written and truly heartfelt.
As I read through it, my head keep bobbin in agreement with every scenario discussed.
I agree, inspite of Arjun appearance, mentally even, can not be blamed. That is just just so true to Kaveri. Although this Anger/jealousy that seems to surface on Varun’s voice every time Arjun’s thought as much as crosses her mind is something I’d like to explore.
There definitely seems to be something between Arjun N Varun that Khushi isn’t made aware of or isn’t being able to see, (which is also keeping us in the blind regarding the same).
I still have to write my comment,. Lekin saman nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karu….😳🙃
@Meera Aati hu thodi dear mein, dilko Thoda quabu Mein karke aur dimaag ko Thoda focus Mein dalke….
Warna yeh kiss toh Meri Jaan hi Legi Aaj.
. 😍😍😍😍
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Ok I will wait dear avni
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Waiting waiting Avni ☺
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Here!!
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Meera loads of luv for this one!!
Mann mein laddu phut rahein hain….Happy very Happy !!
Khushi and Arnav don’t need words!! Everything about the update is just amazing amazing !! This is my most fav update till date!!
Khushi’s thoughts, AV’s sentences in between……..aahhhhh maar dala !!!
Will be back with more !!! ….La La La La……
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Will be bavk with more … when?! Jaldi aajaa Lavs
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Anu mein aagayi … off to read all your wonderful comments …..
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La La La La La Lavz! Kiddharzz meri jaan? Gaayabz? Brb bol ke bhaag jaana has become a habit, sudhar ja! :D
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Appu 😊, am here now……. 😂 yes yes – I know, will curb the habit soon…
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Too many distractions this week kept me away from River….But I am here now ;)
Update – 😊😊😊
Every line about the update is exciting and thrilling, I will give anything to know what’s going on in AV’s brain. A week ago in River years AV was not even looking at Khushi and today they are kissing each other 😊, way to go AV Sir but but your sane mind speaks about the mess and much needed talk – high time you do it. The distance that has been covered without having a proper talk – Kya yehi pyar hain ? Haan Haan yehi pyar hain !!
Barring Ti-Di’s warning coming back to the camp, there is a decision behind his early arrival. It is not impulsive like the other night, there is surety to his actions and I like to believe that with/without khushi’s accident this would have happened. There are so many things unsaid between the two that it was becoming hard for both Khushi & Arnav to take that one step forward and for once AV has taken that step forward and also the next one that there is no going back to Arjun, either! Hopefully return of Ti-Di shouldn’t make him backtrack his decision…
For Khushi -The thought that AV’s past with Saira doesn’t matter to her and all her apprehensions about him walking away from this, his past experience being a grand example for her, Yes if they had the talk about Saira this fear would have been curbed but because it is not so Khushi shouldn’t take her next step based on this…
The final conclusion – they are not going to forget this and also no going back to Arjun, what is there to separate them?? Khushi’s fears?? Arnav’s guiding forces?? or any factor which I cannot of at this point ;)? Now it is not about someone else coming in between them, it is more of a conscious decision from both the sides to come together, the prologue doesn’t look like they have come together….so we wait…
Thank you Meera for bringing the ghost of Arjun and not him! XD
The bike ride ..someday…hopefully it is Monday :)
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And forgot one more thing…Perfect song for the update Meera!!
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Beautiful Lavs. How easily you said all what I was feeling myself. I don’t need to write a comment anymore as it feels to me that you bared my heart❤️.
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:) Meenu ..you are sweet!!
Nope you are the midweek relief and you cannot do that to us …Comment chahiye toh chahiye bas!!
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I second that Lavz 😘
Meenu, chop-chop !! How can you even think of not writing a tarakta, bharakta comment. Jaldi se, hum sab besabri se intezar kar rahe hain !! 🤗😘
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Lavanyaji, sapnon ki duniya mein rehana hi accha hai
Good to see you here! :-)
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😊 Cannot stay away from River for long ..
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Good to see you Rivering Priya :)
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Lavz, it’s difficult to stay away for too long :-) AD does put the spanner in the works many a time!!
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Beautiful comment Lavz 😘😘
We all are afloat on the same dinghy!! 😉
Kab, Kaise, Kyun… Sooch kar hum sab ka dil ghabra raha hai😳
I am going to stop the overthinking as the outcome is not in my hands. I will let Meera tell her story, sit back and go with the flow. 😊
I also know we Sanki Sisters will hug it out when the ominous clouds roll in !! 😊😘
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I tell the same myself D, that I will not think and speculate every time but anyway I do it, I have stopped thinking about this thing too now XD
True!! Sanki Sisters are the sahara through this ride :P
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Can wait to read :) … Welcome Meera …
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Jaadu Hai Tera Hi Jaadu, Jo Mere Dil Pe Chhane Laga
Deewaane Mere Yeh Toh Bata Kya Kiya Tune, Mitha Sa Dard Hone Laga
Yeh Kya Huwa, Pehle Na Aisa Hota Tha, Main Hoon Kahaan Main Jaanu Na
Koi Mujhe Itana Bata De, Ghar Ka Mere Mujhko Pata De
Jaadu Hai Tera Hi Jaadu, Jo Mere Dil Pe Chhane Laga
Deewaane Mere Yeh Toh Bata Kya Kiya Tune, Mitha Sa Dard Hone Laga
Yeh Kya Huwa, Pehle Na Aisa Hota Tha Main Hoon Kahaan Main Jaanu Na
Koi Mujhe Itana Bata De, Ghar Ka Mere Mujhko Pata De
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Wah! Another Aamir Khan number. I am not surprised! Those were the days he looked the part of the original chocolate box hero…..closest in person to Mr Arnav Varun as we perceive him in the River….great selection! 🙌🏽👏🏽
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Mmm..
I still will vote for our IPKKND heart throb Barun to be as AV sir..
He can easily sail in this role :)
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You bet, girl! The one and only!!
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Uff … I think we’re all on cloud nine !!!
What a kiss !!! All pent up emotions and feelings were poured into it … The burn on her back was the last thing on her mind … it was everything a first kiss should be and much more … the adrenalin rush …
But alas his concern for her wound bringing them back to earth …
Thank you Meera for not bursting our bubble so soon … we look forward to the much awaited bike ride to Rishikesh … and the dreaded talk with Arjun :(
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The chapter name itself gave that Meera di is gonna us what we all have been waiting so eagerly for! Totally worth the wait and much more. So true .. Dene waala jab bhi deta jhappar phaad ke! We are going to get a bike ride on Electra and hope some more in giving into their wants 😃
The kiss was yummy.Hope I’m not being too..ermmm.. Can’t help it after this update!!!! Have gone crazy basically.😁 The confusion she has just for addressing him is so genuine. He also showed so much change from being a broody weighed down AV Sir in River to being cheesy and then some streaks of college back into this Arnav. This needs to be back completely which might be possible with their really needed talk. It’s really a mess for both of them. The talk with Arjun is defiantly not going to be easy. What reason is she going to give and how is he going to take that? He promised their friendship won’t be affected in any way.
The smile not coming to her face as she kissed brought in some fear that she was going to go back to being guilty and may be not think about them. But Arnav’s pleading command, if that does even makes sense, put a break to all those returning to Arjun and not thinking about them. She is going to give them a chance and she has decided that without even knowing about S. So happy to see that she acknowledges that she was ore than delusional to even think of giving Arjun a chance.
Sometimes I feel like writer ji keeps drooling over him and them together as she writes. Dead drop gorgeous. That’s what she writes, feels more like her. Achha hai. We drool over here while commenting :P
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Well well well, now then…
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Me too! Had been waiting…
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Hey ……….
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Arnav – Khushi have this chemistry which would burn everything in the vicinity . Khushi for the first time is feeling like a women , her body is set on fire with just a kiss . Arnav would have understood his power over her just like she has on him . Physical attraction is the first attraction later comes trust and Love .
The kiss has proved her whom she really love , Arjun is , was always a friend . She couldn’t think anything beyond friendship with Arjun . She really need to tell Arjun that she chose Arnav . The conversation with Arjun will be heart breaking *sigh* Love is complicated
For now i am happy with the progress between AV & Khushi . Bike Ride to Rishikesh , it is like dream coming true .
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Oh yes
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My song choice. On repeat. Update and this.
Will be back soon :)
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Me too here
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Me….Me….Here
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Awesome update Meera. Smile and blush didn’t leave my lips and face for the entire update. Now Khushi knows different types of kisses and yet to explore so many more kinds. Arnav is cared and protective of Khushi. Lover boy is surfacing slowly and steadily for his lady love.
Khushi took big leap and gave into her hearts desires. I hope she will have heart to heart conversation with Arjun really soon.
Bike ride and just them. Do we get the continuation of this in next update? I am thud and waiting.
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Can imagine them both on the bike :)
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Finally!!!
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Another update that will go down as my one of my favorites!!! I could ask for nothing more!!
A hearffelt Thank You Meera — For heeding to our constant requests in the last few updates asking for more romance! For indulging us with this update that completely made mush of all of us! And have us looking forward so fervently to the next update!!
Only you can do that to us Meera, with your writing! So much happened between them and yet things will go awry and to what extent!!! Only your writing can leave us in such suspense — the wait for each update is sheer agony and yet we are full of apprehension wanting to know the whats and the whys!
Always awestruck with your writing and more so with you, Meera!
Stay blessed always!!!
Comments on the chapter — dont know how many times I have read and re-read the chapter — ab aur kya boloon!!! Bas samajh lo haalat!!!
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And how the hell did I miss sayinng — Thank you for the Uninterrupted kiss and all that followed!!!
A lot of us held our breath till the end not believing this!!!! :)
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Interruptions to kisses – nah – think people who want to kiss each other manage to find privacy more often than desi TV would have us believe ;)
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There are interruptions because of some nirdayi writers as well Meera…pata nahin kya pleasure milta hain yeh kar ke aise writers ko! :P
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Melodrama , besabri, desperation sohniye😜😜
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Awwwwwwweeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Beautiful and heartfelt Kavi😀
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Kavi loved it!! 😘❤️
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Hari parkaass thanda paani in litres pileejh
Hello hi bye bye halat kuh theek nahi hai!
Hum aathey hai
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In liters nahin Priya… In gallons kaho !! 😉😂😘
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Ditto! 😘
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Oh my god! That was some update!
But how did it go from here to “the name that was threatening to disrupt her world. Again”. There is a feeling of dread which I can’t overlook. The fight between the girl’s mind and heart is still on and probably will continue. That she’ll definitely turn down Arjun is sure now, but the aftermath of that does not let her start a relationship with the person she wants to be with. Why do I feel that lot of skeletons are going to come out of the closet?
But in the meantime, we wait for that bike ride, something to tide us over the heartbreak on the way…
The wait is going to be excruciating this week :-)
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For once, I am thankful to the morons who control the cooling in my office… it was freezing in the room and it certainly helped! Office mein HP nahin hain na :)
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Lol Anu 😂😂
Thande, thande office mein hot, hot reading aur phir thandi thandi aahe bharna !! 😂😉😘
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Rofl Priya — paani se bhi kuch nahi hoga!!!!! :)
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ab kya bole,,,,,,,,,,,,picture to abhi baki hai mere dosto :)
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That is such an amazing update!!! Loved it M!! Eating boring healthy food for lunch at office and here I was thinking I have to sit in my cube and think about my work but nope u made my boring Monday :-)
Okay should I feel guilty that I don’t feel bad that Khushi will break Arjun’s heart as for some reason I don’t feel he is serious about her and he will recover and rebound really well with the next girl!! Wow that was a kiss, u really cant go back from it now. Cannot wait to see where you will go from here hopefully they all will talk and move forward!!!!
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So it was not a dream.. and there is a bike ride !
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Main bhi aa gayee bhagti bhagti.
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I remember all of us cribbing when Khushi didn’t take the bike ride with Arnav. If i had known THIS was in store for us, I would not have said a word! You put stars in my eyes, Meera, with this update.
The kiss! No wonder europe is so hot these days. Itni saari hotness! I am burning in this heat.
Nobody saw them kissing? I was on tenterhooks all the time waiting for an interruption or for it to be a dream.
Does she realise the hold he has on her. She listened to him unquestioningly and is going for the tetanus shot. And she wanted to give this up for Arjun. She could never have done that. Wish she’d let him talk and atleast listen to his explanation. Wish she’d give him a chance!
The upcoming bike ride is bound to keep us all up in the clouds till next monday.
Hoping for atleast one more romantic chapter befor you bring us down to earth.
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One of my favourite songs.
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Yes, Charu, she put stars and hearts in my eyes with this update! Ummeed is now soaring! 😍
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My heart is on a permanent dhak dhak since yesterday. Hope its not tachycardia. 😉
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😝🤗♥️💃🏻
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Shhhhhh… Don’t say such things!
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Subh subh bolo Charu, tumhe Riveria hua hai !! Hum sab ki tarah you too are feeling lightheaded with uncontrollable dhak dhak 😉😘
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ROFL…..❤️😍Riveria❤️😍….😝😂👍🏼👌🏼
River dictionary,…👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Rivering
Riveria.
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😉😘
Ab River ke waasiyon ko Riveria hi toh hoga…baki sab ko loveria hoga !! 😂😂
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Ab woh din door nahin jab hamari apni River dictionary bhi print hogi, along with the story.
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😂😘
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Epic Divz! 😂😂😂
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ROFL
Full flow mey hai aaj
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Kal ka nasha abhi gaya nahin 😉😘
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It was in store. When I made her say no – he promised to not leave her with a choice ;) I had to hold back from saying wait wait at the time
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Good you didn’t say anything then. The surprise is even sweeter now!
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And we def admire your control merru jaan as per sohni 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Say that’s again,….
-He promised to not leave her with a choice -😳😳😳
So did HE know this (accident) or did author ji ONLY know this…. 🙀 Meera tum hume kyu confuseya rahi ho? I mean how could he have anticipated this? Or this happened by chance and he had SOMETHING else in mind? 😍🤗😊
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Just wanted to say the bike ride was planned even when Kaveri said no to the first time AV offered
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Nahi nai nai nai,…..😝😂🤗🤗🤗🤗
Yeh itna simple nahi ho Sakti jitna aap dikha rahi hai,…..
Daal Kuch tou definitely Kaala hai…..😝😝😝😝
Abh aap hi batao aap aise batati hai yeah waise…..😂😂😂😂😂
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Really ?!? 😉
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Divz this is playing unfair!
Hayee hum ijj the gones
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😂😂😘🤗
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Divz seriously — all your gifs are qatilana!!! Ghayal kar deti hain har baar.. and office mein hote hain tab post karti ho !! Samjho yaar haalat hamari!!!!
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😉😘
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This scene is one of my most favorites…
And let me add 2. The half smile on the stairs after the first kiss by poolside; and 3. The smile, accompanied by love shining i his eyes, after see in Khushi wearing the bangles while he coerces her to get the Prasad from him sneakily after the havan… 😍😍😍😍😍
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2. Ye lo ;) <3
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Oh Divs!!! How do you do this!!!! You should be crowned the Gifs queen…
Where do you get these from?! Aap mahaan ho!
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Anything for my Sanki Sisters :D <3
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3. Aap ka prasad ;) <3
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Tu kisi din marvaayeg Divzi! Bhaggu bacha le ! ❤❤❤❤
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😉😘
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I like that, oooh I love this then! :D And then they ask me why I love him so much! Kya bataayein! ❤
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Avni tumhari tarah I am also confused 😳
Meera, please elaborate yeh kya bola aapne mujhe samajh nahi aaya !! 😳😩
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Your brain is on overdrive Avni… what were you drinking 😉
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I knew it! the way he had said it in her ear (I remember very well “come with me” I had found it very Sexy!!) …the confidence was probably the promise :P
Meera please do keep sharing trivia(s) as these …you had mentioned once that you have author notes which you will be sharing at the end, apart from that a request – these trivia(s) in between will let us enjoy the journey more :)
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Oh wow! I shall come back
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Sairaat! The perfect song for a perfect update! You surprise me in so many ways, a marathi song from you wasn’t even in my wildest imagination!
Glad to have you back Meeru Jaan! Back with a bang! Kitna intezaar karvaaya yaar!! :)
arey koi vaadaa khilaafi ki hadd hain
hisaab apney dil mein, lagaa kar toh dekho
qayamat ka din aa agaya rafta rafta
mulaqaat ka din badaltey badaltey ;)
(Thats a ghazal sung by Ghulam Ali called Mareez-e-mohabbat! My personal favourite! )
I was happy Arnav wasn’t ready to let go of her this time. And more happy because she was willing to acknowledge the fact that there is no other way other than his way. I loved the fact that they were willing to deal with the Arjun situation together because both of them wanted the additional complication resolved as soon as possible. It seemed almost like a reflex when she said “I have to tell him first”! The belief that she just couldn’t be with Arjun had won the battle at last! At least now, there is no hemming and hawing about what needs to be done. It is crystal clear. Although the thought of repercussions of her decision regarding Arjun are weighing on her mind, her heart has finally been set free, feeling light enough to fly, rather ride!
The dugdug is Bullet Electra!?! The firing fires my heart beat re Meeru Jaan! I have heard a lot of stories of the chhoti dholki along with it :D Personally, I am of the opinion that motorcycles (if I may dare call this beauty that!) are made for romance! It is THE vehicle which gives you the feeling of togetherness, physically and emotionally … you are literally flying along with him/her because you are technically in air!! :D Wise words of experience! ;)
So there is no doubt that this is going to be a joy ride, what with AV Sir ji being in such top class form and mood! Khushi will remember this eventful day for the rest of life. Poor thing, she has been witnessing eventful changes in her life with the rising and setting of the sun every single day since she has set foot in this place! If the capriciousness nature of life has to be experienced for real, this is it really! The entire turn of events were unexpected right from day one, including the accident today!! A person would lose his/her mind in this process but she’s still standing tall. Proud of her, honestly!
Happiness is what I feel right now, though some corner of my heart dreads the impending storm. But I’ll ignore it for now and bask in this sunshine you’ve bestowed upon us today! Beautiful update after a long wait, just what the doctors prescribed!
The update reminded me of a song. Songs like these stay with you because they are incredulously stupid & irritatingly hilarious and you wonder…what the hell was the lyricist smoking when he wrote this one!?! ;) :D
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Oh Sohni, dil ko choo liya and rula diya with this update. You just said it all and so beautifully. Heart is truly filled to the brim with happiness today and I do hope these two work it out….with or without the specter of Arjun looming over their heads! And interesting song selection! Haha! 😎😘
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Anu!!!! You know, I love your full name so much that I feel I am doing some injustice by calling you Anu! Anupama is such a beautiful name, such a beautiful meaning! 😘😘😘
Aur kitthhe ho jaana? Aaj kal kahaan rehti ho? Missed you! Ek do comment maar ke gaayab hoti hain madam! :P Idhar aate rehna behna! :D
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Haha! Anu ho ya Anupama…call me what you will! Right here my girl, tum ho chuppa rustom….MIA for days….trust your holiday went well! And idhar toh hum rehte hai hee! 😍as that song ‘Soch Na Sake’ famously goes…..”ab mujhko jaana kaha ke tum hee ho safar aakhiri!’ Isn’t that the state with us and the River! Otherwise life is as crazy as ever! Stay in touch too, girl! 😍
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😘😘😘
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What is the meaning of Anupama?
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Indescribable … Rather jiski upama words mein nahin de sakte
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Oh motorcycles have loads of potential. And Bollywood has always fully leveraged it!
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Oh…Motorcycles have loads of potential!!!?? Achcha?? Main nahin maanti, you’ll have to prove it to me in the next update :P
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And here is one which used to play a lot of times on Chitrahaar when I was growing up and has Motorcycles and romance both!
I do now know if this remains a link or is automatically embedded in the comment. :-D So if it does not, my bad!
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Sohni jaan hugsssss!!!
You said it all — I honestly have nothing more to say!!! Bas, lets enjoy this for as long as this lasts… till Meera unfurls just how the hell can something go that wrong from here!!!!
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Those lines from the ghazal are beautiful!
True. Khushi’s been on a rollercoaster right from the moment she stepped into the camp. Even amidst this joy when the thought of impending heartbreak seeps in, it just feels like – Chaar dino ka pyaar O Rabba, badi lambi judaai.
That Govinda song! 😂 What were they thinking?!
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Lambi Judaai! What a beautiful number…and trust you to remind me of it Nivi! Dekh, now Ive to go listen to it! Pareshaan karke rakha hain chhori ne! :P ;)
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Sohniye tussi chaa Gaye. You said all about Khushi and her roller aster ride of emotions which is going to continue for few more years — why this love and game of destiny is so cruel.
But sohniye now I need a long comment from Arnav’s point of view as well. You see you have spoiled us now and I am still thirsty to read more from you. Take your time when u can do it but definitely write when time and mood permits Meri jaan.❤️❤️
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Thoda sa wait and Appu’s Magic shall prevail. :):)
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Wait is hard part Meera
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Mere baarey mein itni pyaari baat karte hue aur bhi pyaari lagti ho Meeru jaan! :P The word magic coming from the magician herself! Today’s date will go down in history! :D
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Oh Teri,….
Meera koun said magic?!?
Uski writing ya jo usne comment pe likha????
Now ur making me Antsy and scared at the same time….
Oh by the way,… Congratulations!!! ,….last update pe 1000+ comments 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
So, whens the party?
Author ji, AV and Kaveri ke sang on the bullet ride along the road to rishikesh….😍
19th September nahi chalega 😝 uss dine HUMARA river update MONDAY Hota hai,…please pick an earlier date/day for this wonderful BuLlEt DATE party …..😝😂😍❤️😘 Eagerly waiting ur official invitation. 🤗🤗🤗
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Tu badi BOLD hogayi hain Avni :P ;)
Kya hua ekdam se? Rendering mein locha ya WP playing games?
Love you btw 😘😘
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Arey Sohni dear,………BOLD baat Karen ke liye bold Hona bhi zaruri hota hai,…😉
Abh tum na loche ko chhodo,…aur mudde ko pakdo … Party chahiye ke nahi …toh bas! 😝😂
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“Waqt se pehle aur ummeed se zyaada…kisi ko kuch nahin milta!”kahaavat suni hain na tumne? :P
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Suna hai,…lekin umeed nahi Meri Jaan,… Kismat suns nai….
Phirbhi…
Hum woh hai jo,
Haunslo KI tarkash Mein, Koshish Ka Wo Teer Zinda rakhha hain,
Haar Jaaye Chahe Zindagi Mein Sab Kuch,
Magar Phir Se Jeetne Ki Ummeed Zinda rakhha hain…
😝😝😝😝
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I fell off my chair ! I just feel like saying ‘Jai Hind’ at the end Avni 😄
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Amen😇😇
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Meenu meri jaan! 😘😘 Thank you :)
Par mere samajh mein nahin aa raha, ki AD is troubling me.. ya AV :P The next update, after the bike ride, I promise a big AV wala comment about just them on the bike, covered in all angles and positions! Pukka! Jasbaat ki aandhi…pyaar ki baarish! :P ;) :D
Love you Meenu 😘😘 :)
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Oh my… that is ine heck of a teaser you have put out there Sohni ☺
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Yes Anu you are right—appu ne meri bolti band Kar Di and chingaari Bhadka di( lighted the fire even more). Now waiting has turned to desperation from eagerness. Meera only can help now.
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Yeh teaser tha? ok, then Im training with the best! You know inspiration and all that ? *nudge nudge Meeru Jaan* :P
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Sohniye😘😘❤️
Your bottomless pitara houses dil ko chooney wali shayari !! 😘❤️
Beautiful words luv verbalized in your distinct style❤️
What are these stories of Bullet ki choti dholki ?!? Humme bhi batao 😉😜
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Google maaro Divz. Details milenge :D
I have a few friends (both genders) who are crazy about this thing. Jab dekho, yaari aur savaari…thats all they talk about! I have had the naseeb of riding it as well, the bike is a dream! So can’t blame them! :)
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Sohniye darling Googleji ke kisse boring hain…I need explanation with mirch masala, aur aap ko toh experience bhi hai… So please mujh agyaani ko gyaan dene ki kripa kijiye…badi meherbani hogi 🙏🏻🙏🏻🤗😘
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kidhar koo phasa rahi hain jaana! Arey yaar, chhoti dholki is the silencer jo fit hota hain dugdug pe. Apparently there are noisy ones and there are these really nice ones with a good thump. Aur doston ke kisse on these things re, kahaaniyaan chahiye na harr cheez ko glamourise karne ke liye!!! :D Theres this cult …and they are mad! Bass!
And about my experiences lol, I’ll write a book on it some day lol, utna ho jaayega shaayad :D :D :P
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Pakka, meko proof read karni hai yeh book 😉 Someday kyun now is a good time as any other 😉😘
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Comment likhne ko time nikaalna pad raha hain, tu kitaab ki baat kar rahi hain jaana! Woh bhi abhi?! :D Ab kya boloon main? :(
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Kuch mat bolo, likhna shuru karo
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leh! tum bhi shuru hogayi? Aur koi timepass nahin mila?
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Priya 😘😘
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Kuch mat bolo… Sab kuch likh dalo !! 😉😘
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tum dono aapas mein gappe maaro, main chali! dinner time! :D
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Nor fair 😜
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We’ll be the proof readers, editors, content motivators….what say?!!!
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Priya neki aur pooch pooch 😉… Dekha Sohniye itne sare chahney wale ab kya sharmana.. Shree Ganesh kar hi do !! 😉😘
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BTW….. which doctor wrote the prescription? One of the Riverians right 😀
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This is reply to Sohni for dinner time—– how many dinner time sohniye—- how come u still stay slim trim and khubsoorat despite so many dinner times😜😜😜😜😜😜😜🤑🤓😻😘😫😫😫😫😫—– just kidding. Running away 👻👻🤓
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Appu :) … shayari is for Meera if I understand it right!! 😄…Wah Wah !!!
Capriciousness – Seriously Khushi has endured since the time she stepped into the river camp, very true that she is standing tall, Atta Girl !!
How on earth do you remember such kind of a song? 😂😂
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Haan… Shayari for Meera. And that song.. Lol double seat se yaad aaya. 😂 isse bhi zyaada khatarnaak gaane zehen mein hote hain… Bass wahi sahi hain. Neeche utaare toh log maarenge 😂😋
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Ohh meera😘.. Dil garden garden hogaya..😍
You really do the unexpected..I was afraid to read this as I’m not sure if you’ll make it turn into a dream..
Wow loved this kiss and now can’t wait for the much awaited bike ride😜 This isn’t a dream right !!! 🤔
Glad that she made her mind and decided to talk to arjun.. Hope he understands her..
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Whooooo! In Bullet Electra to Rishikesh. At last it’s going to happen. Ghat roads, so safe drive needs the now injured Pillion rider to tightly hug the Bullet driver. Ha ha that , ghat roads, breezy wind and a tight hug, next week will be the most special update of River of Joy.
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Worth waiting Meera
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Amazing update Meera. Worth the wait. Hope things are getting better at your end. Waiting for next weeks bullet ride update. Praying that these should not mess up again the golden chance to talk out their hearts , as both of them mess up royally every time.
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Heyyyy….so you made them ride together. The one missed in last rafting was made up this time !! That was a very nice update and everything was real !! So when are they going to talk about the mess to arjun? Waiting for more.
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Oh god what’s going on here Meera! That kiss was gigantic leap of relationship and man I am going to hold you on to it since you have raised my expectations and standards of first kiss. It felt like molten larva generating heat out there in the first part of the update.
To tell you the truth, how much ever I enjoy the kiss and the giddy feeling of love Khushi feel, my heart is breaking thinking over Arjun. I understand Khushi knows what she is doing but however her actions are going to burn and scar Arjun and I simply simply can’t stand and watch it. Hence I can’t truly enjoy Arnav and Khushi and their this happiness in finding each other. It’s all a complicated royal mess! My heart is with the losers Meera, you know the unrequited lovers, may be because I haven’t moved past being one, I simply can’t enjoy this romance. Your writing is brilliant and it does make me feel the beautiful magic called love. Love is pain as well as an illusion. What I feel is Arjun’s future pain caused by love and Khushi’s illusion called love.
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Your words are one of the ones that always stand out Maya :)
Today, I wonder what made you say Khushi’s illusion called love?! Was this view tainted given the ramifications for Arjun?
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Thanks dear, though I never thought so, my words are the reflection of my feelings which I felt when I read the story. For me love has always been an illusion. For 4 years Khushi had not been sure of her feelings for Arnav. I agree there was something unresolved conflict in her heart. 5 days before Arnav makes a comeback in her life and things go uphill. All those conflicts and tugs of desire and availability of Arnav and potential unavailability of Khushi is what pulling strings here (according to me) and yes from the prologue we know there is a break in the relationship. May be all these contributed to my saying love is an illusion
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When I opened river tonite I saw it being posted or seconds after posted but by the time I finished reading about 30+ comments.. hmmm I will come back after this sinks in….
N just one last thing m. The length of this chapter is applaud worthy..
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Too good Meera thank God they did this before she spoils three lives not wanting to hurt Arjun. In the ways of the heart listen to your own and not care about breaking another’s otherwise u give them a lifetime of hurt rather than that one shock! Loved it u portrayed it sooo beautifully really enjoying your story thanks
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Hi meera,
This story is fab…but arnav is still very much a mystery….which i would love if unravelled soon….and i had this doubt since u started this ff..how fat is khushi actually here….because we cannot picture sanaya in the same frame as overweight….
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This story is not meant to cast Sanaya at all! That woman could put runway models to shame!
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Whom do u visualise as ur khushi for this story?
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the eternal question in the blog – cast :) Sometimes I think that Meera might feel giving away casts might hinder the story than help ….
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The thing is there is no clear cast in my head. Especially because they are pretty young. She is just 21! So it’s a little difficult to find the right people. Plus even when I cast CW and EIT – it remained less than satisfactory :S
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When I read books, I imagine characters based on authors description and I like that way. If the character remains with me without a face then it is really a good book for me. And Meera your Kaveri Khushi remains with me without a face and also as a beautiful person inside out!
Sometimes when they make movies based on books, I don’t like shaking up my imagination and usually stay away from such movies ..Reading and imagining stuff is one creative quality that I have I think and I like it to keep intact :)
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Interesting take on cast Lavs…
For me, I have not yet hated movie cast for ruining the book’s character. Often, it has only helped me enjoy the movie better. Be it Hunger Games or Gone with the wind. But that does not mean it will never happen ☺
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I understand your point…..it is a plus to read the book and then watch the movie, but sometimes I am not satisfied with the actors or acting or screenplay, the movie spoils the book for me…so I like books better…but I do have an exception “Lord of the rings” is an amazing amazing movie, but then movie was nothing less compared to books :)
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I loved that movie Lavs
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Rhet butler in gone with the wind was —- delicious and yummy— agree — he was brilliant and made story even better but I agree with Lavs as some actors spoil the book image of story.
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That’s the thing I don’t have someone in mind. Films and Tv hardly cast overweight women so it’s a little bit of a challenge to find a face that will go with my idea!
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I don’t need cast Meera. Your story creates imaginative characters and I personally am happy with them. Sometime Braun Sobti ( as in GIfs posted by sanki sisters)does come into picture for some of AV sir but def not sanaya or any other—
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I m excited about the bullet ride…..
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Aren’t we all? And your name brings some luck to the potent potion of love, motorcycle and wind. :-D
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Oh I wish it doesn wear off though ;)
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Meera is brewing her own version of Amortentia here.
Even if luck wears off, love won’t.
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Hee hee amortentia doesn’t create true love JKR says though ;)
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Agreed. But true love is a distant goal , not to mention elusive one.
Let it begin with attraction, that is a potent emotion too.
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:D of course! Except I keep thinking of Tom Riddle Sr. and poor Merope Gaunt. JKR really doesn’t like that potion – like Merope wasn’t enough she also gives us Romilda Vane…I only hang on to the brief moment when Hermione smells freshly mown grass and peppermint
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Beautiful update! Well worth the wait!!!
Cannot wait to read more!!
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Waiting for these ear snipping moments 😊😉😍😘
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One heart will definitely break Jay, Arjun’s. Feel for the guy.
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I am also worried for Arjun. Can I have Arjun please 😜😘😉😄
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You will have to fight Bhavi for him !! 😉😃
Speaking of that choti Nautanki where is she?? She is MIA since the last chappy?!?🤔
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I am ready to mingle and share him 😊😁
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I know… it has been a while.. exam time?
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Either that or she has had her phone taken away by her speed breaker # 1 i.e. Mom ;)
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That means Arjun is all mine 😘😍😉😊😃
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😂😉
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Beware.. Bhavi is back!
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Hi meera😃
Ausum update👏😃
What a kiss😘😍haye
So khushi cannot give arjun chance now after their kiss
She is clear
Let see how her conversation goes with arjun
Most important where arshi goes from here??
They will go desperate ways?? Or think about future??
Thanks for the beautiful update
Update soon😃
Tc😀
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Absolutely delightful and delicious update. Worth the wait..
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Hi Meera,
I have an interview lined up tomorrow and I was preparing for it and suddenly, Bam! I got a mail with the latest update.
I was torn between reading more about MYSQL and update and I guess what I chose is obvious. :-)
But it made me happy. It was truly wonderful. The crazy rush of adrenaline which comes with first love and first kiss. It is one of those things which you do not forget. It maybe clumsy, awkward or messy, but it still holds the charm of a lifetime.
AV here is a good looking guy but does not love make us look at world and object of our admiration with rose tinted glasses?
And the end of it was the song. I DO understand the lyrics. And the word Sairat means wild, crazy and much more. It cannot be translated.
The post reminded me of a line from a much more soft song/poetry in Marathi. It says “Ye aaj reshamane deshil kaataru yaa” which can be roughly translated to “let’s cut the silk with silk (silk is used for touch)”. Ah, how frustrating it is to try explaining it in other language.
M
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Stupid autocorrect! Since it was messed up, I thought of giving the whole couplet. The full line was ” He shwaas reshami, an he sparsh reshamache, Ye aaj reshamane reshim kaataru ya” ( The breaths feel like silk and the touch is silk, let’s carve silk with silk)
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Good luck for the interview M :)
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A bit belated, but thank you!! The kiss was good but an expected motorcycle ride made me even more happier !!!
On other note, the interview went well! :-D
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Damnnnnnnnn yessss!!!!! Bullet is hereeeee… Hahahahahaha… Was this a part of the original plan or u got so many requests for this bike ride after u ditched us last time??? I guess a hit of both…
I officially love Mondays now… All thanks to u… I don’t know how to wait for another week to read further… This update was beyond perfect…. Exactly what I wanted… All arnav and khushi and no one else… And it has happened after so long…. I loved it that khushi is not running away at the moment and is ready to explore her feelings with Arnav… I know she will talk to Arjun and it can’t be a cake walk considering his feelings… What I m hating is that khushi and Arnav will not be together even after all this… Considering the present story that’s what I am guessing… Can’t trust khushi to be bold and selfish and grab her chance to have a happily ever after…. She is sensitive and won’t leave her friend wounded….
Or I am just totally wrong and they are actually together in the present story too?? Maybe taking their time to explore the relationship.. Like a distance relationship?? And now arnav is there as her boss to surprise her… Too cliché? Damn I am going mad….
So it’s better that I wait for you to tell the story😂😂😂😂
Continue soon Pls… U can feel what I am going through right???
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Hi Meera
What a surprise!!
Hope things got better at your end.
It’s Eid and you updated that to
a wonderful update.Finally they kissed.I don’t have words to explain what I feel now.After reading Two to Tango and all I could think was about the prologue “what would have happened between them “.
Then I thought I will just enjoy the current flow and dream about the Bike ride.
By the way I do say car for my SUV
😋.We changed our car to a SUV last year but the habit of saying (should I say shouting)”Get in to the car quickly “is still stuck with me.
I have decided to take an effort to change that.
Hope we get a romantic breathtaking bike ride update next time 😋I’am being greedy I know!!!
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The car vs. SUV refernece made me smile. Languages are interesting. I speak Tamil at home and scream ‘Get into the vandi’ – vandi meaning vehicle – so I am not going to look like that ignorant fool to our leads :)
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‘Get into the vandi’ sounds downright stupid!!! For the records, I say the whole sentence in Tamil :)
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Ha ha…ha Anu, when I read ‘ get in to vandi’ I was saying God please no one hears her…other than her family😉😉
No offense its just funny that’s all.
Vandi in my language is small cockroach.😜😜
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😂
But I loved get into the Vandi :P
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Kiss.:D
In a hurry
will be back to comment
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💖💖💖💖
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On cloud nine now!!!
Phew finally!!! Was worth the wait..😁😁
I hope this makes things clearer for khushi… In her decision making… It wont be easy though…
Your story has such a soul in it… Never get enough of it…😍😍😍
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I LOVED the kiss and I AM very happy that we didn’t get any Shyam Babu here to disturb them 😌
Sorry still AD is very much in tensions and hopefully I will get peace soon to enjoy this story
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Best wishes for AD Latha!
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Thank you dear🤗
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I love this song 😌😊
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At last .. They kissed ..and waiting for more on the way to Rishikesh… And song is so beautiful and we do not need translation .. It has so beautifully portrayed the attraction of first love..
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💃💃💃💃💃💃
They kissed — yay
Complete kiss
He used tongue also( I am cheeky today)
He also touched her back
He can not stop looking at her lips
He cared for her wound
He actually made her bun( for me that was aww moment, even more than actual kiss❤️) and touched her neck/ shoulder
He told her not to go back to Arjun
Flirty , lighthearted AV sir is finally back
He was as affected as her after the kiss
He suggested her to wear what kind of clothes
He still behaved gentlemanly and stepped outside to let her change😜
He had soothing gel in his backpack for her wound–does that mean he came prepared and he was informed by someone about Khushi’s accident and he cane running— here this is answer to our speculations
He promised to take her on his Dug dug👌👌
I absolutely loved today’s update and thank you Meera but dil Abhi bhara nahi abd asking for much mooooorrrreeeeee❤️❤️❤️
Loved and loved today’s update
So many other things
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I too loved the part where he tied her hair and applied the gel even more than the kiss. Shows he cares for her!
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That was sublime! Arnav Varun’s care….we are all goners seeing that dimension of AV Sir!
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The tying her hair …. now I am transported to the Sangeet day… green Saree… teri meri and him taking off the hair clip 😍😍😍
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That was a hell sexy dance and scene. What Divya said—- yes the eye sex with sizzling chemistry— how they did it— amazing. His eyes spoke all the emotions and that was superb as all these GIFs prove. That is why IPKKND was only one time ever in history type of show and we all are addicted to these characters somehow.
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Ditto ditto ditto Meenu :)
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Meenu 😊
The hair tying thing was def an aww moment…How easy is it for him to get into her space..I love that aspect of him very much …barging into the tent, checking her wound with so much authority, tying her hair up 😊😊😊
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I almost died there. How will they live away for next 4-5 years— thst us what killing me. Even though I want to be on cloud 9 after this update but Meera has pulled a rope on me by that prologue 😭👻😁
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😂 – pulled a rope…..
Meenu we will cross prologue bride when we reach there, for now lets enjoy building and burning bridges ;)
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prologue bridge* I mean :)
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I completely forgot we are in tango land …I was still in building and burning bridges mode XD
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Meera, for now want to dedicate the below song to their first real kiss .
Will be back with more later.
Jebon mein bikhre hain taare
Khaali huaa aasmaan
Haathon mein dhoop hai mere
Barfeela baaki jahaan
Rooh gaaye jhoome jaaye
Dil kahe baar baar
Ishq kar le
Ishq jee le
Ishq labon ka karobaar
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Nice sing Kavi. Heard it for the first time today.
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Charu, I too heard it just 2 days ago. I think Yashraj films released this as the teaser for the upcoming movie “Befikre”. The original video is full of kissing. I thought if I share that link here, some people might not like it. So just shared the audio.
But its such a beautiful song dedicated to “Kiss” and I thought it suits for Arnav and Khushi’s first proper kiss.
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That was a beautiful song Kavi… loved the picturization and the captions… I dont know if the captions were reflective of the lyrics… thanks for sharing ☺
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IKR the captions are beautiful. A “kiss” could mean so many different feelings.
The lyrics does not exactly mean the captions. Overall it says that “Ishq labon ka kaaroobar” , meaning ” love is the business of the lips “
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Thanks Kavi ☺
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The first kiss actually happens. Wow.
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After reading an update v ll b having a unique feeling abt it tht wont leave for some time..
As of now .. Its complete happiness n a super blush on my face😊… It was a KISS.. Wow really a kiss indeed..
The way u portrayed kushi aftermath the sensational kiss is double super..
As twiggy said a hickey ll b good😜
Bulet Electra bring it on babe..
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Hello hi!!
I apologize profusely for being AWOL, devouring your every word but not giving anything back..kaan pakdke sorry☺️
Will be back soon..
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As long as you are reading and liking what you read – I’m happy :)
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Gazab!! Finally, bullet electra!! :)
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Already 78 comments wow !! Thanks Meera for another awesome update and fullfilling all our wims and fantasies about Kaveri n Arnav’s dreamy kiss which will be follow by the thrilling ride on Bullet Electria!.
Hope all sister and their love one of River family from Bangalore are doing fine
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Yes – please stay safe Meera and the rest of the readership in the garden city….
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Finally the most deserving kiss! Wow…elevating to see the comeback of Arnav Varun! His glow, his flirtatious, striking smile and care were simply amazing.
Bullet Electra! Am sure it’s gonna be joyride! Meera, am sure this time you are gonna make them connect in way they will never ever part!
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awesome update.. loved it..
finally khushi knows that it is arnav for her and no one else.. but am dreading the convo with arjun.. he will surely be heartbroken.. but it is better for all three of them in the long run..
looking fwd to the bike ride :)
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loved it
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Meera,
Thank you for the most awesome update. My comments are not just extremely delayed but will now likely see a repetition of what all our River sisters have said before me so beautifully! My apologies for that, no excuses except to say that the comment I typed up got deleted by wonderful Word Press two times in a row! I know seriously! Perhaps I need to stop doing this while I am half asleep and in bed! Haha! The need to get through and commend you for a job well done always appears to take precedence!
Anyway, moving on….this was incredible. Arnav and Khushi confronting their feelings and realizing finally that what they have for each other cannot be dispelled as mere attraction. A mind blowing kiss….one into which they poured all their passions and bottled up emotions over the years. Thanks to that earlier interlude and Arnav’s point of view, I realize the feelings were always just as strong for him as they were for her. Breathtakingly beautiful…..if the River were a movie, this scene would surely have merited to it being R rated! Haha! Khushi is unable to believe she initiated something like this and rightly so. This was possibly the first time she did something for herself and said to hell with the consequences! I hope this will mean that she will work it out with Arnav, although the prologue is looming in the recesses of mind and telling me that these beautiful moments might be ephemeral at best. Atleast, Khushi is now forced to accept that she was being thoroughly delusional in expecting to give a relationship with Arjun a shot when all her nerve endings only screamed one name….Arnav Varun is now embedded in her soul. Relationship of equals it may never be, but with this incendiary passion and their strong feelings for each other, they need to at the very least, give it a shot! Loved how Arnav seemed to sense it too….he realizes she might dismiss the kiss Asa bad idea. He refuses to let her go back to Arjun by telling her they need to talk about this. Khushi for a change agrees! Until now she has perceived Arnav as AV Sir from the University, now she realizes he is Arnav first and foremost. She is uncertain what she should even call him! Loved that he starts to call her Khushi yet again….Kaveri has now receded in the ebb and flow of emotions….the motorcycle journey to Rishikesh will hopefully give us a few more flashes of the passion and possessiveness of Arnav Varun and the further capitulation of Kaveri Khushi Gupta…sigh, if nothing else, hopefully it will give them some beautiful memories to cherish in a treasure trove until they meet again!
Superb….take a bow! 😘🙏🏼
Hugs,
Anu
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That is some determination and hard work – 3rd time typing!!!! Officially, WP and autocorrect are the most hated things at River side :)
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Haha! True that, girl!
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You brought my attention to AV calling her Khushi ☺ …re-read it and I am glad he did call her Khushi this time ….
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You bet, for me it is always Arnav and Khushi…in life’s happiest moments, hamesha! 🤗
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That was a toe curling, heart jumping, me all swooning kiss. The messy hair Arnav and the deshelved or better yet ravishly devoured khushi, if only “they can get what they want”.
It was amazing to see the glimpses of the old Arnav Varun underneath this Arnav and I’m so happy that he made his appearance in khushi’s presence.
I was so unhapy when khushi refused the bike ride back than but now I know why. Coz it wasn’t a bike or bullet ride it is “Bullet Electra”, and maybe they can have anither kiss like her first kiss.
One that khushi is going to remember for her lifetime like she said. One that cleared all the confusion that there is no going back from here. How they sort this mess out is to be seen.
P.S. I’m still to hear the song. But like other river songs i’m sure it will be awesome.
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And this week..Bullet it is. after a long wait that makes my dhak dhakks haphazard….I am so much in love with this part as atleast she felt it’s a begining….my athma shanti…finally, me and khushi are on same page after so many chapters phew😒. Now now… tht bullet raja saheb has given me wayward thoughts….this song flashed after reading this chapter…esp 4 av s question to khushi…
“Kora kaagaz tha yeh mann mera
Likh diya naam iss mein tera
Soona aangan tha jeevan mera
Gayaa pyaar jiss mein teraa”…
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Hayee!
I’m so happy that there was no intrusion. It would have made things bad and frankly at this point of time, I didn’t want Khushi to be burdened some more. Plus it was good that the non-intrusion gave way to her concentrating purely on the kiss, the aftermath of it, and more importantly, Arjun. Things are so fickle at the moment right now; every chapter throws in a twist that makes us wonder how things will go ahead from now on. For example, it was obvious for us to have guessed that Arjun would walk in on the two of them and a guilty Khushi would break things off with Arnav then and there. But now we know that that would mean cheating Arjun. What then shall unfold after this? I think I need to stop speculating.
Oh and thank you for the song…it is awesome. You don’t need to know the meaning of the lyrics…the music itself is beautiful for people to fall in love with it.
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Meera muaaaahhhh :)
That was truly a Sairat update it has pulled the cords in my heart and I am completely over the moon.
They kissed they did it and what kiss it was ..isshhhh 🙈
Finally Khushi has heard what her heart wants her to listen..yes she belongs to Arnav. Even if they aren’t together Arjun is never an option coz it’s just not right.
I am happy she has taken decision to tell Arjun the truth I am proud of her..this conversation wud be very difficult on her part as somehow I feel Arjun will do his best to influence her (m saying this looking at his behaviour few days before when he spoke to Khushi) hoping against the hope that she makes him understand and I feel he will agree with her decision otherwise how are we going to relate to Prologue :D
Seriously love you Meera for the Prologue otherwise I don’t know what I have done without it.
Arnav ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
What should I say about him how can he be so handsome and so cute at the same time. How do u manage to make him so damn good..Sighhhh..!! (He is not good for my married life.lol )
Loved how he understands the unspoken thoughts in her head how he catches her lies. Beautiful.
I m excited about Electra ride..waiting for Monday to come.
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Meera Khushi dream kiss it was or are we gonna get some more in next update ???
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This was no dream! :)
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I meant this was the kiss similar to one she dreamt once :)
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Oh my:)! What a fabulous update! I’m speechless. I’ve read this update so many times and got goosebumps every time. Can’t wait for the electra ride and some more passionate moments. I hope this is the beginning of a wonderful relationship between them. Nobody could come close to your writing style. Brilliant👍😊.
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Oh my goodness. Be still, my heart!
Yes sharam haya is all in the gutter. I have my partner in crime here. Nivi and I are all set for the Ellectra Ride!
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OMG!!! What a kiss….. That’s the way first ones should be….they are worth the wait…;) Change you forever….
and now looking forward to the bullet ride…
PS. Sometimes I think Arjun came onto her to make her realize…..Maybe maybe….
Take care….Thanks for a lovely chapter…
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A chapter full of Arnav and Khushi.
Only the two of them, no one else…
What are they going to talk about?
I would say their seperation was the after effect of the talk she is goinb to have with Arjun. The guilt of hurting him left her no choice but to stay away from Arnav
There was a point where you have hinted us with “goodbye”. Then again, coming back to him… I m totally confused…
I would have to refer to prologue, it says they were meeting after years…
What went wrong between the kiss and back to prologue…
You are a cruel writer…. Messing with our mind with your wickedness
The kiss, and his ability to read her mind… Was it the reason for her decision to go seperate ways… Or was Saira going to be the cause? The long overdue talk definitly will include Saira… Then again, he was totally into her even then…. So, that is not an option…
Not even his ability to read her mind and them not been equel in the relation as her mothers advice, that is not an option either.
So, I m left with the Guilt… Of hurting Arjun…
Anxiously looking forward for their lone time
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Thanks for the update Meera. Hope all fine in your Ad.
What an update!!! Can’t wait to read their upcoming Bullet Electra ride:) that’s a beautiful song from Sairat.
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Dear this update is too too fabulous…………….. I loved it………………
Arnav-Khushi & their first kiss…………… Its so divine…………………. Arnav is back with a bang………………..
I will love to go through this update another time……….
Hats off to you for this brilliant update………….
(orchids8888 from IF)
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Kyun itna dard izhaar-e- ishq deta hai,
Chahat agar na ho mukkamal to gham deta hai.
Hai malum mujhe yeh ek khwab hai lekin,
Tera narmi se pesh aana, aag ko hawa deta hai.
Nazron se teri hai Hal-e- dil zahir,
Hichkichana tera jale pe namak kar deta hai.
Arjun is as important to me. He is very important part of the story.
He is in for a real pain…
This is for my Arjun.
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Beautiful Sejal. So much kashish in your words.👌👌
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I honestly feel crippled that I am unable to relish your magic in its original form Sejal… google translate mars its beauty 😔
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Baring ones heart brings only pain,
Unrequited love gives only pain.
I know this is only my illusion still,
Your leniency fans the saprk of passion in me.
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Hi Anu,
I was trying to help you with translation but I think it sucks…so you better stick with Google translate.
Last couplet….lets finish what I started…though I shouldn’t have in first place…
Your eyes speaks volume about your intentions
Your hesitant action, rubs salt on my wounds,
It sounds like I am learning to cook…instead of writing a poetry…😀😀😀
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Thank you Sejal. That was so good…. i can only imagine how much more beautiful it must be in Urdu…. thank you once again….
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Josh-e- ishq main hum yeh Kay kar gaye,
Jis baat se darte the, wohi kaam kar gaye.
Sambhala tha dil ko aaj tak badi mushkil se,
Bahon main aake teri, khud jina mushkil kar gaye.
Rabta hai dil, dard-e-ishq se fir bhi,
Tumhi pe magar, dil apna fida kar gaye
Aur kya lachari ho dil-e-bebas ki,
Haare khud se aur sajde main tere sar kar gaye.
For my khushi
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Goodness! You are a whirlpool of poetry that can still heartbeats!
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Sw105
You are amazing
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simply beautiful!!!!
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Khata aur ek hui hamse,
Tujhse be-takkaluf ho gaye
Tujhse kahe bina apna Hal-e-dil,
Tera hi jazba bayan kar gaye.
Kuchh iss tarha se pechida hai wo nigahein,
uss hasin jaal main khud hi giraftar ho gaye.
Aur kuchh bhi ho ab ke ye na hone denge,
Dhanak leke aaye woh,shab-e- hijr kar gaye.
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You wrote this. You really wrote this…
What words what beauty. Even praise is insufficient!!! You write somewhere? On a blog? I’d love to read more! This is a true treasure. And I will always cherish it
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Me and blog?
I can’t have Arnav Varun there.
Not even khushi, Ti-di, Arjun, Aman….in short I wouldn’t have River there…how and what can I write?
River makes me write,you make me write. Thank you Meera. Thank you for witting River,
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You could still put it up in a blog Sejal… similar to how Nivi had added her poems for the River… it makes it easy for people to revisit and relish the precious words
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True that completely, Sejal — pls do write and put up a blog!!! Would love to read more!!
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gosh, you are just so gifted!!! Pls keep writing!!!!!
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Thanks a ton for the update… another much well written chapter. Superb :)
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Amazing update
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I needed to get my exercise in somehow!
I am here, and I will catch up soon…I am getting ready for dhak dhaks, Mer, because your stories never fail to deliver the acidity ;)
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Khush kar diya Meera.. loved the awesome update so much.. kiss was beautiful and the aftermaths ki baat hi mat karo.. so happy to see ARSHI talking this normal.. well waiting for the ride on bullet electra.. :)
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just awesome:-D;-):-):-)
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Wow…..be still my heart. The crush she had just transformed itself into a full blown attack of everlasting love and physical attraction at full speed while her poor mind in the background is still trying to desperately remind her of Arjun and all the reasons why she can not give in to hear hearts desires etc. ever the pragmatic Kaveri!!! Half undressedm plastered to the man of her dreams and trying to think logically. Love this girl.
Amazing how you have literally taken like 5-10 minutes and made that into a full blown update with emotional turmoil center stage. So looking forward to more. i am picturing Kaveri with a a Dimple Kapadia like persona……not skinny but well rounded lol.
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After that scorching kiss, even the searing pain in her burn took a back seat :-)
“She had just said she needed to talk to Arjun first – it implied that she would come back to…this…that they shared.” Arjun has been her best friend for so long and as she admitted to herself, she had been her true self without inhibitions only with him and her sister. So, naturally, saying no to him is not a simple task by any means; she does not want to lose that friend and what she had with him. And this thought weighs in in her mind all the time, even as she shares these passionate moments with Arnav.
Choices like this are hard – someone has to be hurt. But however much a person can pretend and hide even the innermost feelings, being true to one’s own self, accepting that and making decisions based on that cannot always be easy.
And Khushi is so young – sigh!
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Woah. What a kiss. WHAT A KISS. Its B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. bas, so passionate, so intense. A chapter full of Arnav-Khushi. A happy chapter that is. wow. Now cant wait enough for more of them. Though knowing they won’t be together by the end of this part, but there has to be something major if even after this they dont give themselves a chance. Looking forward to see ahead, very impatiently that too.
I followed the blog, I’m next to ignorant how things work here, am i supposed to get email notifications, that i haven’t got. I’m confused. :(
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Usually when you follow a blog, you first get a confirmation email. The for every post you will also get a notification email. But WP is WP … it sometimes screws up really well 😀
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Umm… I don’t know why Khushi thinks she can go anywhere except forward after that pure hotness of a kiss!. Arnav, true to his character, is not letting her get away with her own efforts to jeopardize this. So I’m waiting with so much anticipation to see what happens next. I’m really glad and relieved that her original tentative plan of saying yes to Arjun has been scrapped.
And cannot help but comment on the ending dedication song. That was so beautiful, brought up so many memories. Chatting among their respective group of friends, while holding another conversation with eyes and silent gestures between the two of them. :) The dancing while doing PE was just hilarious :D
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